Posts Tagged ‘love’

How do you like this idea for a short story? Please answer the question! I need feedback! Why be mean, PEOPLE?

June 23rd, 2010

Romance. Vampires. A human. The 18th century. There is a trader in town whom people fear and accuse of vampirism. The trader has a beautiful daughter. One day, the mayor of the town had his son run an errand for him since he let the servants have a day-off. He drops of some stuff for trade at the trader’s house. He sees his daughter and falls head over heels. He thinks there’s something special about her. More special than the other village girls whom he has slept with in the past.
He goes home, completing his errand, but he couldn’t stop thinking of her.
That day, the townspeople catch the trader and stake him. Hearing this, he comes back for the girl and brings her to the manor, thinking she’ll be safe in his home. Little does he know that his father is the head of the vampire-hunting party responsible for the death of his lady-love’s father.
The dad tries to trap the girl and convince the townspeople by having the priest called. She admits she has never been baptized and wanted to be. But then she recoils when she sees the priest’s cross.
The guy then realizes that the woman he loves is a vampire. He has fallen too deep in love with her for him to stake her. He puts her on his horse and ride of into the sunset like a Prince and the Damsel-in-distress. They ride through the night with the villagers at their back, the hounds after them. When the hounds kills his horse, they continue the chase on foot. Finally reaching a hiding place, they rest. And make love. For the first time. The following morning, it is revealed that the place they ended up in was the crypt beneath the trader’s house. On the guy’s neck are two puncture wounds. Happily ever after?
What do you think of the story?
One said "You lost me at the mention of vampires," the other said "too long did not read!"
The **** is wrong with YOU PEOPLE!!!!!

How do you like this idea for a short story?

June 19th, 2010

Romance. Vampires. A human. The 18th century. There is a trader in town whom people fear and accuse of vampirism. The trader has a beautiful daughter. One day, the mayor of the town had his son run an errand for him since he let the servants have a day-off. He drops of some stuff for trade at the trader’s house. He sees his daughter and falls head over heels. He thinks there’s something special about her. More special than the other village girls whom he has slept with in the past.
He goes home, completing his errand, but he couldn’t stop thinking of her.
That day, the townspeople catch the trader and stake him. Hearing this, he comes back for the girl and brings her to the manor, thinking she’ll be safe in his home. Little does he know that his father is the head of the vampire-hunting party responsible for the death of his lady-love’s father.
The dad tries to trap the girl and convince the townspeople by having the priest called. She admits she has never been baptized and wanted to be. But then she recoils when she sees the priest’s cross.
The guy then realizes that the woman he loves is a vampire. He has fallen too deep in love with her for him to stake her. He puts her on his horse and ride of into the sunset like a Prince and the Damsel-in-distress. They ride through the night with the villagers at their back, the hounds after them. When the hounds kills his horse, they continue the chase on foot. Finally reaching a hiding place, they rest. And make love. For the first time. The following morning, it is revealed that the place they ended up in was the crypt beneath the trader’s house. On the guy’s neck are two puncture wounds. Happily ever after?
What do you think of the story?

is my comic good?

May 31st, 2010

a girl falls in love with a dead guy on halloween spends the whole day with him they make out she drinks from his blood vampirism and the guy only lives for the day each samhainso they know they are meant for each other and the girl knows she is crossing the boundaries with the dead for the sake of her little romance Japanese anime

Is my japanese anime comic book good will people buy it would you buy it?

May 26th, 2010

Ok so basically my comic is japanese anime based on dark romance. A innocent girl meets the love of her life on halloween when her and her friends stop by a cementary on halloween, the friend that owns the cementary is called Karie and Karia reveals the secret of the cementary every halloween the dead live, so basically this girl sees this guy and falls in love instantly knowing he was meant for her, so they take the rest of halloween to get to know each other and fall in love more as they know there are scenes in the comic refering to vampirism the girl makes out with the guy and since the guy’s dead some of his blood flows into her mouth and she drinks from him. and in the end of the comic she assists the dead guy back to his grave and he tells her I will see you next halloween. I think this is a true masterpiece for those who are gothic and dark and into massoquism or vampirism and anything to do with dark romance

TO THOSE WHO CAN COMMUNICATE TO THE DEAD PLEASE READD TEN StARS?

April 7th, 2010

when i was 15, nice and innocent young girl i had a dream that i fell in love with a dead guy (The guy had life for a day because it was halloween) ever since that dream ive been dark minded, into vampirism, and a little necro you know What could this dream be it hit me like a ton of bricks… does anyone know why this dream changed me thnx 10 stars if you can leave me your email

Any other ideas for this story?

April 5th, 2010

I want to make a story about a female vampire who meets a boy named Luke and finnds out he’s a Vampire demon and heres were i am stuck i want them to fall in love but i don’t want to be acussed of copying twilight. Can some peaple help me come up with some ideas for my story i am so stuck.

Here is a part of the story i made this is narrorated by the male:

This misguided female vampire with hooded purple eyes that are like two windows on the evening sky walked right passed me and turned into a table to my right. Curious I watched as she tossed around her long strait brunet hair while talking to her mortal friends. She didn’t look as though she was suffering from any standard vampiric disabilities like sometimes they would have red eyes though purple didn’t help her human discise either. And as she took a big bite out of her sandwich it let me know that she still had a appetite. And though I should be planing the right moment to dispose of her before she could get to me I just stared at her wishing I could know more things about her like if she was single or if she had the same feelings for me too. Anything but how this beautiful creature prevented me from doing my job.

Is there any stories about werewolves and vampires falling in love?

March 17th, 2010

Thanks for the answer guys, I appreciate them. There seems to be alot of confusion on Twilight here though. Edward is a vampire, bella is a human, Jacob is a warewolf. Both Edward and Jacob fall in love with Bella but not with each other lol.

How do werewolves find a mate?

March 14th, 2010

I’m writing a story about werewolves and I was wondering how they found mates? Like wolves or do they know who their mate is from birth? Is it just a random thing or do they fall in love or what?

Sims 2 Nightlife NPC vampires?

March 3rd, 2010

One of my Sims has built a love relationship with one of the NPC vampires and is wanting to get engaged. I’ve never really played this game before so I need to ask a few questions:

1. Can Sims move in with a NPC vampire?
2. Can they have woohoo/baby?
3. If I cure vampirism, will they try to bite again?
4. And are they still uncontrollable after they have moved in together?

What novels dealing with werewolves or shapeshifters would you recommend?

March 1st, 2010

Being I am trying to get more familar with the mythology that other authors use dealing with werewolves, I want to read some novels with shapeshifters. If you happen to have any suggestions or recommendations for any decent novels dealing with shapeshifters or werewolves I’d love to hear them. I’ve already read the Twilight Novels and Sookie Stackhouse novels, so I’d love to hear others besides them.

 
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