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Romance. Vampires. A human. The 18th century. There is a trader in town whom people fear and accuse of vampirism. The trader has a beautiful daughter. One day, the mayor of the town had his son run an errand for him since he let the servants have a day-off. He drops of some stuff for trade at the trader’s house. He sees his daughter and falls head over heels. He thinks there’s something special about her. More special than the other village girls whom he has slept with in the past.
He goes home, completing his errand, but he couldn’t stop thinking of her.
That day, the townspeople catch the trader and stake him. Hearing this, he comes back for the girl and brings her to the manor, thinking she’ll be safe in his home. Little does he know that his father is the head of the vampire-hunting party responsible for the death of his lady-love’s father.
The dad tries to trap the girl and convince the townspeople by having the priest called. She admits she has never been baptized and wanted to be. But then she recoils when she sees the priest’s cross.
The guy then realizes that the woman he loves is a vampire. He has fallen too deep in love with her for him to stake her. He puts her on his horse and ride of into the sunset like a Prince and the Damsel-in-distress. They ride through the night with the villagers at their back, the hounds after them. When the hounds kills his horse, they continue the chase on foot. Finally reaching a hiding place, they rest. And make love. For the first time. The following morning, it is revealed that the place they ended up in was the crypt beneath the trader’s house. On the guy’s neck are two puncture wounds. Happily ever after?
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Romance. Vampires. A human. The 18th century. There is a trader in town whom people fear and accuse of vampirism. The trader has a beautiful daughter. One day, the mayor of the town had his son run an errand for him since he let the servants have a day-off. He drops of some stuff for trade at the trader’s house. He sees his daughter and falls head over heels. He thinks there’s something special about her. More special than the other village girls whom he has slept with in the past.
He goes home, completing his errand, but he couldn’t stop thinking of her.
That day, the townspeople catch the trader and stake him. Hearing this, he comes back for the girl and brings her to the manor, thinking she’ll be safe in his home. Little does he know that his father is the head of the vampire-hunting party responsible for the death of his lady-love’s father.
The dad tries to trap the girl and convince the townspeople by having the priest called. She admits she has never been baptized and wanted to be. But then she recoils when she sees the priest’s cross.
The guy then realizes that the woman he loves is a vampire. He has fallen too deep in love with her for him to stake her. He puts her on his horse and ride of into the sunset like a Prince and the Damsel-in-distress. They ride through the night with the villagers at their back, the hounds after them. When the hounds kills his horse, they continue the chase on foot. Finally reaching a hiding place, they rest. And make love. For the first time. The following morning, it is revealed that the place they ended up in was the crypt beneath the trader’s house. On the guy’s neck are two puncture wounds. Happily ever after?
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