Poetically speaking: any thoughts on this?

I long to feel the tides move,
To feel the life of the waves crashing.
Pouring over and down on the rock that is me,
Trying to reach past, to set me free.
Am I too hard? been gone too long?
I can hear them outside,
Moving, crashing, licking, lapping,
Slowly trying to wear away.
Traitorous head, fickle heart,
Betrays me, keeps me from [...]

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