I need help with the story im writing….?

1. Moonlight
I gazed out the window and saw the gleaming moon shine a shaft of light onto the dank, dark, smoggy streets below. The longer I looked I seemed to notice something else, someone else down on the street gazing up looking at something, looking at me. I could feel them peering into my deep [...]

Midnight poem, something to read before bed?

Seafaring Premonitions
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As my thoughts they sunk today.
My heart shall drift to bay.
Shortly , very soon…
Dragged up from murky midnight deep
to shore on sand as waves do sweep;
so slow and soft, so calm and neat;
that with them spirits rise.
To whispered lands of summer’s heat
where daylight murmurs and salt air speaks
of sunlight tickles on sand kissed feet
and [...]

A poem, very open to critiques. Will you take the time?

Seafaring Promonitions
_______________________________________________
As my thoughts they sunk today.
My heart shall drift to bay.
Shortly , very soon…
Dragged up from murky midnight deep
to shore on sand as waves do sweep;
so slow and soft, so calm and neat;
that with them spirits rise.
To whispered lands of summer’s heat
where daylight murmurs and salt air speaks
of sunlight tickles on sand kissed feet
and [...]

What Happened To The Song?

Angel in the moonlight,
Casting shadows in the night,
She lingered in her dreams,
Afraid to break the magic,
With her screams.
What went wrong?
What happened to the song?
Her silken treasures waiting,
Vanished and were gone,
Lost within her sky…
She cried.
Trembling, she drifted,
Softly towards the sun,
Broken promises in her heart,
Half-mended memories of why…
She cried.
Leaving dreams behind,
Letting go what once shined,
Her heart went [...]

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